Published July 25th 2025
Read July 1st-16th 2026
Rule Breaker – A Cute Romance That Needed More Romance
Final Rating: 3⭐️ | 6.42/10
Rule Breaker delivers exactly what its title promises: a forbidden romance between a star hockey player and the one woman he absolutely should not be falling for. While the book has plenty of chemistry, a lovable heroine, and a few genuinely sweet moments, it ultimately left me wanting more emotional depth and less focus on physical attraction.
Characters – 7/10
Ryan is the classic college hockey heartthrob. As team captain, he's talented, confident, and used to having women fall at his feet. He's also known for having one important rule—one he's inevitably going to break.
What I appreciated most about Ryan was that he wasn't completely static throughout the story. As his feelings for Isabella deepen, he genuinely tries to become a better man. His growth comes from learning that love requires more than charm and attraction. Watching him realize that Isabella deserves someone dependable and protective was one of the stronger aspects of the novel.
Isabella, on the other hand, was easily the standout character for me.
An incoming freshman, daughter of the hockey coach, sister to the team's starting goalie, and a sports management major helping with the hockey program, Isabella has a lot going on before the romance even begins. She's recovering from a painful breakup with her high school boyfriend and initially sees Ryan as a distraction from her heartache.
However, her journey becomes much more than finding a rebound. Throughout the story, she gains confidence, discovers what she truly wants out of life, and begins to realize that she belongs in the sports management world. Her growth feels authentic and rewarding.
What really made Isabella shine was her personality. She was witty, quick with a sarcastic comeback, and never afraid to challenge Ryan. Watching her evolve into a capable, confident young woman was easily the most enjoyable part of the book.
Atmosphere – 7/10
The hockey elements were fairly well done. The team dynamic felt believable, and the sports backdrop added energy to the story. The local bar served as another recurring setting that helped establish the social side of college life.
That said, for a college romance, the campus itself felt surprisingly underutilized. There were very few scenes centered around classes, academics, or the broader college experience. Outside of hockey and the bar, the world often felt a little small.
I kept wanting more immersion into college life and the university atmosphere. Expanding the setting beyond a handful of familiar locations would have made the story feel richer and more lived in.
Writing – 6/10
The writing itself was perfectly readable and moved at a steady pace. Whenever the story focused on character interactions, friendships, or relationship development, it held my attention well.
My biggest criticism is that the book relied far too heavily on intimate scenes. After a while, they started feeling repetitive and took time away from moments that could have strengthened the emotional connection between the characters.
One example that stood out was when Ryan and Isabella were caught in the hot tub by Austin. The conversation they shared afterward had the potential to be an important emotional turning point, yet it was only briefly touched upon before the story moved on. I would have happily traded one of the many steamy scenes for several more pages exploring that heartfelt conversation.
The emotional moments were there—the author simply didn't spend enough time with them.
Plot – 6/10
The plot is fairly straightforward: star hockey player falls for the coach's daughter, who also happens to be his best friend's younger sister.
It's a trope-filled setup that has a lot of potential, and there are certainly fun moments that come from all the complications attached to their relationship. Their attempts to keep things secret range from mildly believable to unintentionally hilarious at times.
However, the story often felt like it prioritized attraction over storytelling. The central conflict was always present, but it never developed much beyond the basic forbidden relationship premise.
While the romance moved forward, I found myself wishing for more substance, more obstacles, and more meaningful relationship development beyond physical chemistry.
Logic – 7/10
Overall, the story remained consistent and believable within its own world. The characters generally acted in ways that made sense, and the plot moved in the direction I expected.
There weren't any major twists or shocking reveals, but there also weren't any glaring plot holes that pulled me out of the experience. It was a straightforward romance that largely delivered what it set out to do.
Intrigue – 6/10
One of the biggest indicators of my engagement with a book is how quickly I want to return to it.
Unfortunately, Rule Breaker didn't create that feeling for me.
It took me nearly two weeks to finish because I never felt a strong urge to pick it back up. There was no "just one more chapter" energy. In fact, I often found myself setting it down for days before coming back to it.
That's not to say it was bad—it simply never became compelling enough to demand my attention.
Enjoyment – 6/10
This one ended up being a miss for me overall.
The excessive focus on physical encounters eventually became repetitive and less impactful. Ironically, my favorite moments in the entire book were the scenes where Ryan and Isabella were simply talking, teasing each other, or building a genuine connection.
Those quieter moments showcased the chemistry and charm that made me root for them. They were adorable together, and every time the story slowed down enough to let their personalities shine, I found myself wishing there was more of that and less emphasis on attraction.
Final Thoughts
I went into Rule Breaker hoping for a heartfelt hockey romance packed with emotional growth, tension, and a memorable love story. While the book certainly had flashes of those elements, it leaned much more heavily into lust than love.
The biggest strength of the novel is unquestionably Isabella. She was funny, intelligent, and easy to root for from beginning to end. Ryan's character growth was also enjoyable to watch, particularly as he learned to prioritize someone else's happiness over his own desires.
Unfortunately, the story's heavy reliance on intimate scenes prevented the emotional side of the romance from fully developing. The glimpses we did get of Ryan and Isabella simply being together were incredibly sweet and often far more compelling than the steamy content surrounding them.
Would I read another book by this author? Honestly, I'm still undecided. There is certainly enough talent here to make me curious, especially considering how much I enjoyed the character interactions. If I pick up another book by this author, it'll be because I'm hoping for more of those tender, relationship-building moments and a little less reliance on physical chemistry to carry the story.
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